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If not you--I will find someone else! Open in new Window. [18+]
Felicity demands lessons in the art of making war.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
Very sad story of a father and daughter who have both suffered great losses at the hands of others and try to learn how to move forward in life, yet their demons still haunt them.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
That her father finally gave in and decided to help his daughter do something that wasn't common, but knew that she was right.

PLOT~
Derrick Andrieus wants to see his daughter married again, having children, taking care of a home, not bothering with swordplay. Felicity calls her father out on the choices he's been making since her mother's death, reminding him that all of his whores won't take away the pain and torture they went through when they were attacked.

CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~
The horrors of war can be truly evil and leave you without hope once you've suffered so greatly.
Felicity is quick to point out all of the reasons why this is the best course of action for her now. She's suffered physically and mentally, and could never let a man touch her again. She vows to fight and is ready to learn all that she needs to in order to defend herself. Derrick doesn't want his daughter to do this, but when she threatens to find someone else to help her in her quest, he has a change of heart. Felicity was definitely hard on her father, reminding him of what happened to all of them on that horrible day.

DIALOG~
Gripping conversation between father and daughter. I loved how Felicity fought to get her point across, even at her father's expense.



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