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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
Cute story of how gardening may actually bring people together.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
That Deloris was the one to make the move just seconds before Hank could and that he took it in stride.

PLOT~
Hank is digging around in his garden and is a little disappointed that he really has no one to share all of the vegetables with and begins to wish he had a better hobby. He remembers he joined a book club, and that is where he met Deloris. He decides to make her a nice basket of vegetables and take it over to the woman. Before Hank can finish with that task, his phone rings.

CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~
Hank realizes that gardening is better if you have someone to share the goodies with. He decides to try to see Deloris so he can give her some of the haul. Deloris beats him to the punch and they agree that she will come over for coffee. It was really sweet when Hank decided to hide the basket of vegetables in the garage he'd made for her so she wouldn't see it. I can't imagine what he'll do with all of the extras he will find himself with.

DIALOG~
There were just a few sentences of dialog but the phone call was smooth, and Hank's inner dialog was great as he thought about Deloris.


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