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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
This is really a wonderful story about family and how values are instilled in us at such a young age that carry with us throughout our lives.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
The way each memory helped to shape her life. She took everything her grandparents gave her and put it to good use and became a success.

PLOT~
A woman recalls her Sunday adventures with her Nana and Papa, and how no matter how tired her Papa might be, he always carried her back to the car on his back once their fun filled day was finished. Each pivotal moment of her life she found strength in a lesson they had taught her.

CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~
Princess learns so much from her wise grandparents. Fantastic descriptions of her childhood and adult life as these cherished memories shaped the big decisions she had to make. I could feel the love of family and how she carried on these traditions with her own grandchildren.

DIALOG~
The stories her Nana and Papa told her of things in their life gave her great memories to look back on and use throughout her life. The child was filled with wonderment as her grandparents told her about turning little failures into big successes. Great job with the prompt. You really did it justice.

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