Hi Happyfingers, I am reviewing your story "What About Josh?" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This short story is about a family, but not just any ordinary family this family harbors a terrible secret. Claire and Ben were happy until their son Josh was born. Claire wonders why her husband has become moody all of a sudden until one day her parents take her aside and tell her that Ben has a personality disorder. It is later revealed that Ben is Claire's illegitimate cousin and that the personality disorder runs in the family and may even affect little Josh.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short was written, I have nothing to offer you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I spotted no common spelling and grammar errors.

♥ Overall: I enjoyed reading about the troubled family and learning the terrible secrets that the family had. The secrets were a shocker, I can honestly say I did not see them coming. Thank you for writing such a great short story.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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