Hi Melissa Hall, I am reviewing your short story "Screams of Hell" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This was an interesting horror story. It is about a woman who is awakened from a deep slumber by a high pitched noise. The woman in question goes to investigate the noise only to find out that there is a monster in her home, which scares her because it wants to consume her so she sets the thing on fire along with her house.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: I personally know how hard it is to write a 300-word story, so what you did was an amazing feat and I have nothing to suggest to you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not notice any common grammar or spelling errors. Everything seemed to be well written.

♥ Overall: This was a quick and easy to read horror story which will keep your heart racing to the end. Thank you so much for writing this awesome short story and I look forward to reading more of your work.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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