Hi NipponFury, I am reviewing your story "Secret meeting?" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ I honestly do not know whether or not you intended for this to be humorous but it was. Anyway, this story is about a guy named Frisken that is in the military. Well, while Frisken is training his commander praises him which Frisken is unaccustomed.

Shortly after someone else walks into the room who just so happens to look identical to his commander. The only differences are two things: The aviator glasses, and the thumb. Later it is revealed that one is an imposter.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: The short was well written, I have nothing to offer you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I spotted no commor spelling or grammar errors.

♥ Overall: I really liked what you did with this short story, I loved the whole imposter at a military base theory. I also enjoyed Frisken's humor, that was really refreshing. Thank you so much for writing such a good short. I look forward to reading more of your work.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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