Hi Gingerlyme, I am reviewing your story "Beach" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This short is about a woman named Sandra who one day decides that she is going to give up being a life guard, but Sandra's plans of giving up the lifeguard life are cut short when she receives a letter from her boyfriend stating that he and her best friend Esther were in love and getting married soon.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: I have no suggestions for you at this time, your short seems to be well written.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I spotted no common grammar or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: This was a fast paced read that was filled with many emotions. I felt Sandra's excitement when she thought that she would be starting a new life with her lover, and then I felt her crushed hopes and dreams when it was discovered that her lover had run off with her bestfriend. I really enjoyed all of the emotions that this short contained.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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