I was delighted to read this poem and offer a review! I missed out when the PFU first came out, so reading this not only made me smile but glad to have found the contest page. Your depiction of a fluffy pink unicorn was beautifully descriptive and created a beautiful imagery for the reader, especially in poetry form with limited words.



The scenery you created with the creative composition of words made the poem really enjoyable to read. With the mix of subtle danger towards the end, it attracted the reader with curiosity and wonder. After reading your poetry, I now want to inquire of what sort of danger the unicorn and the narrator are going to face.



I had to look up a couple of the words you used, which was educational for me. Even so, our poetry painted a creative portrait I was able to envision easily.



Your use of the prompt given for the Fluffy Pink Unicorn contest was used in a delightful and easy to read manner. As I mentioned, I was pleasantly surprised with the understated twist of the unicorns warnings.






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