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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
It's funny how parents always seem to know what their kids are up to. A clever mom spots it a mile away, and some got to great lengths to make it entertaining for their kids.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
That the mother planted something for her kids to find, knowing they would search, and still got the better of them.

PLOT~
Two brothers are in a hurry to find something. They search a specific room, one being the look out. As siblings go, these two are annoying each other even as they struggle to find what they are looking for.

CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~
I believe Thomas is the older brother because of his perfect annoyed reactions to his brother Lee. Lee is the look out, warning Thomas about being caught, and only goes to help when confetti explodes out of a book. Thomas cannot help himself and just has to know the answer to that burning question. Duped by their mother, the must let it go for today, but I can see these two still continuing the search for their mother's age.

DIALOG~
This worked really well and made it easy to picture the scene as the boys warned one another about being quiet and getting caught. Lots of sibling tension here.

TECHNICAL~
The booked opened

where me-we noticed
House Greyjoy image for G.o.T.

This would be my name.
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