Hi Beebeeb, I am reviewing your story "Hollows Hills: The Town of Evil PART V" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This story is about four highschool girls that are witches. One night the highschool girls go to the cemetery and awaken a man by the name of Count Douierre.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: I think you should add a break in between the witches and Jack and Beverly's dialogue. I was a bit confused when the story was talking about one thing and then abruptly switched to something different. I think this would lessen confusion. The story seems well written otherwise.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I spotted no common grammatical or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: I really enjoyed this chapter of your book. Cheryl is not a nice person, and I look forward to learning more about her, and her coven of witches. I want to know where the count comes in. As well as, where Jack and Beverly fit in, I guess more reading is in my immediate future!

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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