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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Sookdeo, I am reviewing your short story "Breast Cancer Story of Victory" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This short story is about a breast cancer survivor named "Naomi", and her losing what she considers her most feminine feature, her nipples and "Naomi's" decision to get her newly reconstructed breast some 3-D artwork.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short story was well written.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I spotted no common grammar or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: This short story was touching to read, I loved how the author incorporated his own story within this one, and how this story related to his own life. This short was very much relatable. I really enjoyed the emotion that this short evoked.

The author is very much correct. Heroes do come in all shapes, sizes, and forms, and more of them than not they do not wear caps. Thank you for writing such a lovely accounting, I throughly enjoyed this.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely



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