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 Unexpected Hunger Open in new Window. [18+]
You can't resist it... Nor would you want to.
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Review of Unexpected Hunger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
So many relationships start out this way. Even when Katherine's friend suggests the possibilities of her brother's friends, Katherine cannot go there, though she wants. This showed well.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
The conversation between Anabelle and Katherine on the phone as they discussed the status of her recent relationship. This set up the rest of the story and helped Katherine pursue something she wasn't sure she could.

PLOT~
Katherine is crushing on her brother Simon's friend Erik. Simon notices the way Erik is checking out his sister and calls him out on it. Katherine is lost in thought as Erik comes up from the basement to get the snacks she was supposed to be preparing for the guys and things heat up in the kitchen.

CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~
Katherine who shows interest in Erik but doesn't think she can go there until Erik closes the distance between them. Erik, despite Simon telling him no, takes a chance and goes after something he wants.

It was easy to picture Katerine's date with Mr. BMW and how that all played out. A sizzling scene in the kitchen between Katherine and Erik. I like that he stumbled on asking her out.

DIALOG~
All of the dialog between the friends worked well and showed how solid those relationships are. Katherine and Anabelle's conversation was funny, while Simon and Erik were realistic as well. Erik and Katherine had a few awkward moments before things took a big change for both of them.


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