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 Just a Dream Open in new Window. [18+]
Life is simple and complicated all at the same time.
by insomnia_at_rest Author Icon
Review of Just a Dream  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
I don't even know what to say about this piece. It's gripping, sad, filled with emotion, depressing, heartache.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
That it was brutally honest about someone struggling through life and giving up on everything.

PLOT~
Life isn't what it was supposed to be. Each choice made leads you down a path and never knowing which one is the right one, sometimes leads to horrible outcomes. That is what happens here. One wrong choice after another that leads one to believe they have no heart or soul, that their angel has abandoned them and there is no coming back from all of the bad things they've done in life. Hope no longer exists. Even death seems like a waste of time.

CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~
You were able to reach into the darkest parts of oneself and really show how horribly difficult life and truly be. Not every gets the good breaks, and those that get one bad one after another lose all hope and once hope is gone, it is a complete downward spiral that feels like there is no coming back from it. This was the most heart-wrenching story I've ever read.

TECHNICAL~
all of your i'm need a capital I in them.
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This would be my name.
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