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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
A light hearted piece was filled with humor as the Forest Ranger and tree joked around while being high.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
I liked that they talked like good friends. Using the wrong words also was a good way to play upon the humor of the piece. I also liked the swapping out of words with different names of trees.

PLOT~
A Forest Ranger and a tree have a conversation, chatting like old friends. The tree is looking for some fertilizer, but the ranger has none. They discuss this new bush that has been giving the trees the munchies, and the Ranger has also been taking some leaves from it as well. They joke around, purposely mixing up words

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT~
The Ranger who loves his job and the smell of fresh air, out to pick up some more marijuana and engages in conversation with the tree, hoping the Ranger had some munchies in the form of fertilizer.

DIALOG~Descriptions
This all dialog entry worked well as the two were clearly high on the bush and the conversation that ensued was funny as they joked around together, the Ranger promising to bring munchies for the tree next time he came to visit. The warm tropical beach comment and use of all the different trees helped to paint a picture of the forest.



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