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| (4.5)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Creeper Of The Realm  OVERALL IMPRESSION - A solid story about a woman's struggle with depression and anxiety. You really tapped into your main character and made this a gripping story. WHAT I LIKED BEST - I liked that your character changed. She went from letting her anxiety rule her life, to beginning to live again. Even though doubts plagued her, she still put forth an effort. PLOT~ A restless woman can hardly get any lasting sleep as she shuts herself off from the world, especially her own emotions. She refuses to let any of it in until she meets a man that opens her up again. Can she take this chance on love? Will she let happiness keep her depression at bay? CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT~ You showed her struggles very well. I could see her wishing for sleep to come find her. She is now dependant on another and worries that he will begin to fray taking her hope right along with him. Your descriptions were great of her muddled mind, comparing it to murky waters she is desperate to get walk through. Anxiety threatens to take her right back where she started as she twists conversations in her head making them negative, something to run from. I think the worst thing anyone can do to themselves is make trouble where there isn't any.   
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