Hi Harry, I am reviewing you poem "The River Horse" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ Harry to be frank I initially wanted to review your poem because of the title alone. Although, just to correct it. I've never heard of river horses, I've heard of "salt water" horses or feral horses, but never river horses. So I was intrigued as to what may have prompted the title of river horse. Which I guess, would be that the horses are found near rivers.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: The poem was well written. I have no suggestions for you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I spotted no common grammar or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: I throughly enjoyed your piece. Feral horses are the father of their kind and are considered to be spiritual and majestic to many people. They are beautiful creatures, and it's such a shame how many are hunted down and killed annually. Thank you so much for writing this.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

House Greyjoy - "Game of Thrones"