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| (5.0)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby  Rhythm/Rhyme You used an interesting rhyme scheme of ABBA throughout and your rhyming word choices had a great emphasis on this piece. Imagery I love that his impression of Bob was that God molded him from finer clay, as most vampires in folklore have chiseled features that stand out in a crowd. Bob uses the lure of being healthy, fast and strong to pull him into thinking eternal life would be a good thing. He is so easily swayed by Bob's words that flowed like wine--what a great a line. I found myself laughing at the reference to snorted coke. You packed so much information and images into this poem. The visual of eating worms and mud made my stomach churn at the thought. Though I can the other option is just as bad. Impressions One night is all it took to change a man's life forever. After meeting a friend, he gets stranded and strikes up a conversation with Bob outside a graveyard. You can't help but feel sorry for him after he was so easily swayed into saying yes, thinking he could be like Thor on to find out what his eternity entail. Really enjoyable read. |
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