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Review of The howling wind  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
This is a spooky tale that leaves the reader wondering what is going to happen next. Open ended and lets my imagination take over as the poor biker finds himself stuck in a scary situation.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
Good descriptions of his surroundings, the weather, and the chilling sensations he feels when the bike breaks down leaving him stranded.

PLOT~
A man takes his bike for a ride while it's raining. Not even a stray dog crosses his path and he continues on until he runs into engine trouble. With the aid of the light on his cell phone, he tries to get the motor running again, and the howling winds seem to be calling out to him, letting him know he isn't as alone as he thinks.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT~
I wondered what would possess him to go for a ride when it was raining outside. And also if he had done something that would make him a target because of what he hears from that voice. Is this random that he is chosen to suffer? Good questions that leave the reader guessing what the motive is all about. It was definitely creepy. He seemed like a strong guy, knowledgeable about his bike and not bothered by being alone at first. Once he realized there was a voice in the wind, his guard was up.


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