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Rated: E | (5.0)
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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
I can totally identify with this dialogue only story. I've been here myself, trying to get my husband, family, and friends to understand why I spend so much on writing.com. It was nice to see that this is a common theme with us WdC addicts.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
I honestly liked that all of her dialogue was in pink, and her husband was in blue. It was easy on the eyes and helped with knowing who was speaking. Dialogue only isn't an easy task, but you tackled it pretty well.

PLOT~
A wife explains to her husband about her addiction to writing.com. They sit down together and she shows him her portfolio as they discuss the highlights of the site and compare it to others. Like you, I too am waiting for a WdC app. That would make life truly beautiful, and yes, even more of an addiction to this home away from home.

DIALOG~
Their conversation flowed well. It was very natural and it rang true for me as well. Although I think your husband seemed more interested in it all than mine, lol. I could picture them sitting in front of the computer having this discussion. I liked that he asked questions about the merit badges and reviewing. Also that you pointed out how different it is from Facebook.

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