Hello alfred booth, wanbli ska , I am with the earth day challengers and we are trying to shine a light on the problems that face our planet. Things like global warming, changing climates, pollution and such. Your poem will go a long way in creating awareness of these topics.
I think this was a very creative and dramatic item. you did a good job creating it. It is structured using couplets, I don't see that as often as you might think. I like couplets though. They give a final pause at the end of the second sentence. so it gives you time to take in what you are reading. You did a fine job with this.
thank you for sharing, God Bless You.\




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