Hello Azrael Tseng , I am with the earth day challengers, and we are celebrating the earth and shining a light on the problems facing our planet. Your poem will help to tell a story about what plagues the earth. I liked your poem it was subtle and sweet, I was upset by the callousness of the builders, destroying the trees that were so lovingly planted to help our planet grow and heal. The rhyming was so subtle that you could miss it if you aren't careful. I liked your poem very much. Thank you for sharing it with me and God Bless You.




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