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Prompt: “It’s only after we’ve lost everything that we’re free to do anything.”
Fight Club (1999)


First impression: A very engaging story that is neither predictable or boring. This story flowed very well. I really liked how you showed a couple of scenarios of each man and their decision choices. But I especially liked that you waited until the ending to show where they stood. I love the fact that your story does not come right out and say that this is a story between a cop and a criminal who are really a lot alike but who's decisions really make them different. Again, a very engaging story that is also thought provoking. One decision can change the course of your entire life.


Does this story reference the prompt?: Yes

Suggestions: None. This story is polished, well written and complete.

Final thoughts: Growing up, I know that I have heard my elders say be careful of the decisions you make. Think things thru, don't rush into anything. And as an adult, I find myself explaining the same things to my own daughter. Some decisions we make are very benign and will not change our tomorrow at all. However, there are some decisions we can make that will forever change the course of our lives. I love that this story gives an us a perfect example of just that. This story is entertaining and well written. Nice job.


This concludes my review. Thank you for participating in my contest and for allowing me the pleasure of reading and reviewing your work. I wish you continued success with your writing and in life. Good luck with the contest! Write on, read on, rate on!~ Taryn

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