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Thank you for participating in the What's Your Line Contest! Because you referenced my contest in your entry, I am here to review your entry as promised. My review is intended to be helpful and encouraging. Please accept it in the spirit it is given.*Smile*

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Prompt:"There can be only one."Highlander (1986)


First impression: A funny short that gave a really cute spin to the prompt. I laughed out loud when you referenced The Matrix and Highlander. I forgot about the Matrix!

How many of us have heard story after story about that one big catch that never was? This short allows us to be a part of just such a discussion. I love that the story takes place between siblings. It shows the banter that brothers and sisters have, which makes this story light and fun to read.


Does this story reference the prompt?:Yes

Suggestions: None.

Final thoughts: A fun light-hearted story that most of us can relate to. I feel that is polished and complete. There is nothing I can think that of that I would add to it.


This concludes my review. Thank you for participating in my contest and for allowing me the pleasure of reading and reviewing your work. I wish you continued success with your writing and in life. Good luck with the contest! Write on, read on, rate on!~ Taryn

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