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 Bring My Purpose To Light Open in new Window. [E]
Entry for Round 45 of the Shadows and Light Poetry Contest.
by 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon,

I am reviewing your item today for the I Write contest.

I'm not a huge fan of free verse, but I really liked this. You've made nice use of consonance and assonance throughout your poem, and that really appeals to me.

The opening of your poem captures the splendid display of a vibrant dawn. I like the way how you contrast all the promises of the new day with leaving the previous day behind.

Wishing you the very best of luck in Shadows and Light. I hope you have enjoyed this round of I Write.

Thank you for sharing this item! Please keep on writing!

Andy~hating university Author Icon


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