Carly, thank you for the privilege of sharing this review of your good poem. I am counting on my words encouraging you in your writing. :D

Overall Impression: You seem to be fully enjoying your tribute to your Mum! That's great! It shows quite clearly!

Suggestions: Maybe you would consider writing another poem to highlight some of the awards and other successes that your Mum has achieved on Writing.Com. Another great pat on the back that would be!

Rhythm & Rhyme Scheme: There seems to be rhythm, but it is not a traditional rhythm. Therefore, it appears to be a choppy cadence that underscores your excitement. That is certainly doable as well as being important. The rhyme scheme is A-A-B-B-C-C-D-D-E-E-F-F-G-G-H-H. In other words, every two lines is basically a couplet with the same end-rhyme.

What I Like: "I sing your praises and wish you the best." This is a great line because this line is saying what you are doing. Excellent approach!

Thank you for taking the time to read my review. :D