Hey there. I am here on the behalf ogf"I Write in December-January-February"  to review your item. Please note that these are my views as a reader and are not meant to offend in any manner.

First Impression
Your poem and acrostic are in contrast with each other. It is like that secretly coded letter which showcases the real as well as the superficial sentiments. This might be a dramatic explanation, but that is the idea that I got from the poem. It might be because I have read too many unpleasant novels or something.

{c}Suggestions
None.

Final Thoughts
I wish you would change the description a bit. The description clearly outs what you want to say in the poem and kills the sublimity of the hidden message thing.

Thanks for sharing it.

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