Thank you for the privilege of reviewing your poem. I hope I will encourage you, personally, and strengthen you as a writer.

Overall Impression: This is a free verse poem, which is made of four verses of four lines each. The key is the depth of love, not the structure of the words.

Suggestions: There is a great need for this kind of poetry in the world. I believe you have great capacity for writing more of these.

Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar: A comma ends the second line of each verse, except the last. Each verse ends with a period. Nicely done! No worries here.

What I Like: In most of this poem there are no ending rhymes. However, in the last verse the last three lines of both the verse as well as the entire poem have the same end-rhyme. Whether this was done by design or by accident, it is nonetheless a very nice touch. It focuses a great deal of emotion on the object of love, "you."

Thanks for taking the time to read my review. Have a great 2017! :D