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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What an interesting topic and well-done peace. Thank you for writing this. *Smile*

The only part I'm not sure about is, "Oh, how they were loved, and never more than when their faces could be seen no more." I'm not sure I love "more" being used twice there. Or at least "...and never more than when their faces couldn't be seen anymore." That way you still get a connection to "more" but it also seems like a different word. Just my opinion, but obviously this is a wonderful piece since it got nominated for a Quills Award. AWESOME! CONGRATULATIONS!!! That's actually where I found this. *Wink*

Great job and good luck with Quills!

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