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General Comments & Reader Reaction: I don't think I want to be able to be in touch with otherworldly beings. This would spook me to no end. But you seem to take it all in, and know things that no one else has this ability. Living in the house that does these spooky things would drive me bananas, and I would move to another location. But this encounter with a little boy who died years ago helped you with that problem.

Characters: This is a true story, so the characters are the author and his family along with a ghostly child that he encounters.

Emotion, Mood & Atmosphere: The emotion is fear of the basement, unexplained encounters with strange things happening.

The mood is wary, and uncertainty.

The atmosphere is unknown entities that are living in the same house as the author. They showed themselves by creating a sickness for all member of the family, his mother was whipped by an unseen force, showing welt marks to prove what happened to her.

Setting & Imagery: The setting is at home.

The imagery is: "A house I lived in someplace in Ohio gave me the creepy crawlers from the day I moved in. I was petrified of the basement though I was not sure why. Strange things began to happen..."

Plot & Pace: The plot is encountering an otherworldly entities.

The pace is set so that each encounter shows what is happening and how this author goes about setting the record straight.

Themes: Ghostly encounters.

Structure & Consistency: The structure is well written with what happened to this author. It stays consistent and the conclusion shows how the author solves this problem.

Favorite Lines: I always knew I was gifted, if you can call it a gift. I can tell if a house has a "history". In other words I feel people who are between worlds. I don't like to use those terms though. I prefer to think in terms of psychic energy that is left behind. You see I am a reader. I "read" this energy. I have seen people murdered who lived centuries before me.

Overall Impression & Conclusion: Talk about grabbing a readers attention— These lines sure did it for me. Good job!



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Jeannie


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .