Hello Piratess Dawniebelle , I am reviewing this story for "I Write in December-January-February" .

My First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the house having a dark and terrifying energy. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

My Favorite Part: I like the description of the courtyard because I could visualize it in my mind.

My Final Thoughts and/or Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, who cam before us, I suggest changing cam to came. I enjoyed reading this chilling story.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .