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by A Guest Visitor
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hey. I am here from I write group I write to review your entry. Sorry this will be a short review.

I like the story. I enjoyed the way you mixed LGBT with the fantasy. It was fun and interesting way of dealing with it. I do wish it would have been more of LGBT to satisfy the impression I got when I saw the contest it was for.

Nevertheless, it was a good entry.

Thanks a lot for sharing

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