Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating ,

I'm reviewing your item today as part of I Write (which I just remembered I still needed to do ).

First impression:

I love the way you have captured the ways rain affects you.

Form and poetic devices:

Your poem conforms to the rules of a triolet.

Your two refrains are excellent choices as they reinforce the crux of your poem.

There is great use of personification of the rain throughout.

General impressions:

Your poem has a smooth flow to it. It's easy to visualise the rainfall and feel what the narrator feels.

You have written an enjoyable and clever poem, which is no small achievement given that half of the poem is made up of refrains.

Closing remarks:

Wishing you all the best in finishing I Write.

Thank you for sharing this item! Please keep on writing!

Andy~hating university


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