Hello Weirdone-Back in the games , I am reviewing this as part of "I Write in December-January-February"  challenge.

My Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the girl in the shower. The interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

My Favorite Part: I like Jill because she is a sympathetic character. I also like the method she took to get revenge because only a sister would think of that.

My Suggestions: I have no suggestions because I found no technical problems. The scariest part of this story was the first part with the shower scene.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .