Okay, that is one weird piece! lol You are SO CREATIVE! I'm jealous!

I especially love how you have times so we can more easily get an idea of the actual time frame of events. I also like that he says he's going to start writing things down in case someone else reads it. We are the "someone else." Nice work.

I'm glad you told us that this won The Writer's Cramp! I always make a link to the post saying I won and put that in gray at the top of my stuff, but that's me. I like to brag.

Anyway, congratulations and, as always, you did an excellent job!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .