Eagle Eye, thank you for the privilege of reviewing your haiku. As we both know, I will be sharing my thoughts in the hope, that something I write will encourage you, personally, and strengthen you as a writer.

Overall Impression: Great imagery! I can feel the slippery rocks. I can feel the water rushing down. I can sense the exertion of the salmon leaping toward home.

Suggestions: Not sure what I could add, especially since this is a haiku. If I were to suggest one thing, then it would be to write more of these at your leisure.

Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar: This is not needed for a haiku.

What I Like: I like this well-crafted haiku! It draws the reader to imagine an annual event in the lives of some of GOD's Amazing creatures!

Thanks for taking the time to read my review. Have a great 2017! :D