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Hi wykedcrafty,

I am Lorraine and I am reviewing your piece "Invalid Item" Open in new Window. today in affiliation with "The Newbies Academy Group" Open in new Window..

*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.! *BalloonR*


Title: A suitable title that matches the theme of the word search. Your brief description goes into a little more detail about the reason behind the creation of this word search, and you've chosen suitable genres to give your item more exposure. Great job with all three of those things.

First Impression: You've used some fun emoticons here to your advantage. The splash of colour the starfish add is perfect. Not too much to dazzle the eyes. *Thumbsup* Your paragraph you use to introduce the word search is short and to the point, and you've used all the words from your word search in this paragraph, meeting the challenge set. All of those things make an enticing word search, making anyone that stops by want to complete it.

Challenge: Your word search had a range of word lengths, which is perfect to mix up what the player is looking for. Once we're so use to looking for the longer words, we can sometimes struggle with the shorter three-letter ones! It took me 4 minutes to finish your puzzle. I'll let you decide if that means your word search is good or bad, but it's always interesting knowing how long it takes someone else to finish it. I thoroughly enjoyed completing it, and think you've created a fun word search!

Spelling/Grammar: No errors spotted here. *Thumbsup*

Closing Thoughts: Thanks for rising to the challenge set in "Newbies Academy Activities Classroom" Open in new Window.! Your GPs will be on their way shortly and you've been entered into the draw for the Merit Badge. I look forward to seeing you around NAG and WDC. *Smile*

Lorraine

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