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Given: Dec 16, 2016 at 1:44am
Length: 940 Characters |
845 w/o WritingML
Merry Mary Christmas, thank you for the privilege of reviewing your good Than-Bauk poem. These are, of course, my thoughts, and I do hope I will write something to encourage you on your pathway as a writer.
Overall Impression: Your poem is direct and to the point as is the style of Than-Bauk poetry. Nicely done, especially since it is about a cuppa tea. (That is one of my favorites as well.)
Suggestions: Write more of these and include some of your favorite flavors of tea in the poems.
Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar: I'm not really sure this is necessary in this piece. Well done!
What I Like: I love the emotional scene of a good cup of tea at sunrise, which is one of the most serene parts of the day. You've done well!
WRITE ON!!!
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You responded to this review 12/16/2016 @ 5:46am EST
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