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Merry Mary Christmas, thank you for the privilege of reviewing your good Than-Bauk poem. These are, of course, my thoughts, and I do hope I will write something to encourage you on your pathway as a writer.

*ButtonV*Overall Impression: Your poem is direct and to the point as is the style of Than-Bauk poetry. Nicely done, especially since it is about a cuppa tea. (That is one of my favorites as well.)

*Pencil*Suggestions: Write more of these and include some of your favorite flavors of tea in the poems.

*Apple*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar: I'm not really sure this is necessary in this piece. Well done!

*Heart*What I Like: I love the emotional scene of a good cup of tea at sunrise, which is one of the most serene parts of the day. You've done well!

WRITE ON!!!

*Vine1**Flowery**Vine2* Welcome to WDC from me and the "The Newbie Research Center" *Vine1**Flowery**Vine2*
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