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 The Search  Open in new Window. [13+]
Ana must find Terrington. For the Daily Flash 12.14.17
by Beck Firing back up! Author Icon
Review of The Search  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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This is flash fiction which can be extremely difficult to review.

But it is an interesting en medias res scene with the main character eager to find Terrington, although exactly why is not explained. I guess the scene is exciting enough as it goes, but it leaves the reader wanting to know more about the situation.
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