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Hi Monty Author Icon! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

Congratulations on becoming one of the Port Raid Authors at "The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window.! I was searching for something to review from your portfolio when I came across this poem. I absolutely enjoy reading and reviewing nature poetry and when I read the title of your poem and saw the cover photo, I knew I had to come and take a look at it.

The way you worded the short description of your poem was very beautiful especially the words 'mother nature comes with her seasons brush.' The first stanza was light, a good way to open your poem capturing the colours of autumn and how beautifully Mother Nature changes her dresses and setting in every different season, even on every different and new day. Time goes on but the rhythm and the beauty in Mother Nature never reduces and continues to amaze its audience. It's unfortunate people today do not take time out of their robotic and hectic life to appreciate the simple, heart touching spectacles of nature around us, even for a minute. I used to watch sunrise in the month of Ramadan (when Muslims fasted) and it was absolutely beautiful. I have wanted to see it again but I am always asleep at sunrise and even if I try to get up, I cannot because I am simply too exhausted and sleepy.

The way you have shared your memories about autumn was very fresh and vivid. Where I live, there is never a pile of leaves in Autumn but yes, leaves do fall. I have always wanted to feel how it felt jumping in them but haven't. It's on my bucket list *Bigsmile*. You shared a part of that joy, that feeling with me while I was reading the second stanza. The last line of your poem was absolutely beautiful. The flow of your poem was perfect, there was no interruption and the vocabulary you had used in your poem was strong, suitable and built a beautiful image in the reader's mind. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Write On!
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