\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4276805
Review #4276805
Viewing a review of:
 The People Upstairs Open in new Window. [18+]
Grandma's got a poltergeist, and it may just be the answer to David Sullivan's problem...
by J. Robert Kane Author Icon
Review by April Sunday Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with AUTHORS DISCUSSION CLUB  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
NOVEMBER 21, 2016

Hello Mr. Kane --- Thank you for your entry into "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.

I took a few pauses to thoroughly enjoy your traditional length short story, THE PEOPLE UPSTAIRS. Great title!

This is indeed a clincher. You've appropriate setting --- Long Island.
Family tie and characters, Grandmother, David and even Dolon --- whose concluding phone call ends the tale in an endearing type compliment as if a payback to the Sullivan family.

OF: The people upstairs, those invisible mites whom harass the kind old lady, who even cooks for them -- using the hostess card here is quite an addition -- the unplugged TV, reminiscent of Steven King's
STORM OF THE CENTURY -- all combine with fine plotting, step-by-step fortitude making this one a true keeper.

Good Luck in the contest.

Cordially, TEFF
"Invalid Item" Open in new Window.

*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 11/22/2016 @ 5:00pm EST
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4276805