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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window.. Thanks for entering! I also see you are new so I want to wave a warm welcome to the site to you! I think that Writer's Cramp is a great way to get to know people and to read people on the site and hopefully you will write many more entries as time passes here!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* A young man struggles with the wishes and hopes of his dead parents. He has to make a decision and that decision threatens to impact the rest of his life in ways he cannot begin to imagine. The question is will the good parent or the dead parent win as to who has the hold on his beliefs and faith.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I thought you did a good job of presenting how attractive the father's offer was, in light of nothing else materializing at that time.

The transition at the end, to the outcome was brilliant and you did a wonderful job with interpreting the prompt.

Bravo!
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THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read and the judge for today in this contest. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my thoughts, reactions, and experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you! I enjoy doing the reviews that I do or I would not do them. I review quite a lot here, but I wouldn't do it if I didn't enjoy it because what's the point in that. Have fun with what you do and find what you enjoy! I think you are off to a good start already!

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