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Hello bronya777

This is a beautiful, powerful poem with a great title. It speaks as much in what lies beneath the words as it does through the words themselves. I love the repetition, especially of the title. That really creates atmosphere and a sense of foreboding and threat (what if the wicked wake up?). You use rhyme to great effect. Your words are carefully chosen, and this has a polished feel. Congratulations on having this featured in this week's poetry newsletter. On this evidence I look forward to reading and reviewing more of your work in the future :D


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