I must say, you brought tears to my eyes. I was enthralled with the moment to moment scenes unfolding before my bleeding eyes. Yes, my tears were red.
I could barely make it through the first stanza before slapping myself in the face a couple times to be sure I was still awake or alive perhaps if it were the case. Yes, indeed I was awake and actually pushing forward to read the next and then the next stanzas, dripping from the gelatinous fluid being spread hitherto in places such should never be, yet there be it!
I can only say that it was quite spirited, indeed. The ghostly figures feeling an urge to splurge and fill-in where needed for the lady of the evening.
My favorite bad part:
"Spam miners of the Wabasha Street Caves
Bravely blast warm seams of Spam jelly;"
It will be remembered long after I leave this page. Thank you in advance for the nightmares I shall be haunted with, henceforth.
This was bad to the ham-bone, kiddo!
Congratulations, you have received the coveted 1 .
Until next time-- Spam on!
Regards,
WebWitch
You responded to this review 10/26/2016 @ 12:23pm EDT
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