I found your beautiful poem listed when I was randomly searching for something that would reach the spirit, and your title caught my attention. You smoothly wove the perfect words to give the reader a life-sized portrait of one who shows love for another just by her actions. *teapotgray* It is the precious form of love that another knows exists in this person's heart. Although they cannot see it, they can feel it when she is around. I loved the subtlety of the poem. It has a quiet almost whisper-like tone to it that pulls the reader inside the thoughts of the narrator and also allows her to feel the warmth coming from the woman, who holds a special place in her heart for those whom she cares for deeply. It may be invisible to the eye, for it is her own private spot within her heart, but it is obvious to those who are held there, because she exudes the joy of it whenever she is around them, and they feel it. This was just what I needed to read with my coffee this morning. Thank you for that! Excellent! Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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