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  I am reviewing your piece today as part of the "Invalid Item" reviewing challenge.  Unfortunately, I was not able view the beautiful blood moon this year, though I was outside with my camera, ready for a great shot. Oh, well! I'm one of those who set the alarm to get up to see meteor showers or anything spectacular in the night sky I don't want to miss! I'm embarrassed to say, I never realized the blood moon was also called the Hunter's Moon. But now I've learned something new, which is always a plus!   Now... on with the review! And please note that my reviews are always encouraging and honest. I would never intentionally discourage or hurt your feelings.  I am not a professional editor, so this is all based on my personal opinion.  Boo-boos  3rd Stanza, 1st Line: Like the gear's [gear's should be gears] Goodies   Great flow! I love it when there's very little punctuation in free verse, as sometimes I pick up meanings I might not have otherwise.  I also like how you use the lunar shine to unlock the key within you. I especially liked the phrase... unlock the key. I felt you did a tremendous job with this free verse piece. Nice work! Chillin' & Thrillin'  I see your brilliant glow penetrating this nighttime life. You stir that other planetary side  Now that's worth howlin' about!  Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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You responded to this review 10/25/2016 @ 5:13pm EDT