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Hello there, SB Musing
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Bat1*


*PointRight* I am also reviewing your item because it was one of my challenges in "a very Wodehouse challenge" Open in new Window. Lucky you, blindly choosing the one my challenges were hidden under. *Ha*

*BoxCheck* First of all, you did a fantastic job executing the innocent challenges with spot on trigger control and fantastic vision through the cross hairs. This was of course a strange flash fiction story to have to write, for you needed both horror and a slice of comedy. You did well at the slicing and dicing department also. *Smirk2*

*Poison* The story was quick and quirky and it did make me chuckle. Although I felt a tad sad for poor Michael when he had to remain there, as per his father's demands, until he sharpened his teeth with bites on the little lamby-poo. *RollEyes*

*Drop* Chewy little tale about a curious lad who just could not manage coming into his own. The defect needed to be cured one way or another. I also imagine it would take a whole lotta bites through the wool before Michael grew a pair ... canines, of course. (Get your White Walker mind outta the gutter.) He'll probably be counting sheep for many days in that garage. Next time he hears a train go "choo-choo, he may go berserk. *Traincar1gr* (chew-chew-chew-chew) Perhaps a good Vampire Dentist would help? I suggest his father start him off easy by practicing on some chocolate chip, cookie dough ice cream. But the man seemed a bit harsh and had little patience with his son's problems.


*Umbrella* Funny and Horror-fried at the same time. What else could a witch *Ax* for?

Well done, SB! *Bats*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*



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