I haven't read any romantic flash fiction before, you've opened my eyes. I was skeptical at first, but I think you really pulled this off. The grammar and punctuation is flawless which I think helps gives your piece an air of intellect that gives it credibility. Important for a romantic story people can relate to (especially when most people would not be exposed to the level of affluence you have described here).

I love a good play on words, and your denouement was perfect for the story. Well done!


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