Title of Work: : Day Dream (Short Story, Fantasy)
Author of Work: : Markus
Date: : July 31, 2016

Plot:
"A male college student falls asleep in class."

Scene/Setting:
It's Wednesday and Paul Morris is heading for his last class of the day. He stayed out late last night and is feeling the effects today. He finds a seat in the back of the room and tries to stay awake. He loses the battle. As he falls asleep he is fantasizing about his beautiful hot, biology teacher.

Dream: Paul ends up in a room and shrinks to about five inches tall. There is a large bed which he climbs. When he gets to the top he sees a naked woman lying on her back on the bed, and realizes it is Mrs. Deitz, his teacher. He ends up kissing her ankle bone and shrinks again. Climbing up her skin he gets on top of her leg. He walks up her perfect leg and eventually reaches her cunt. Here he stops and examines it. He kisses one of the folds and shrinks again. Paul now realizes every time he kisses her he shrinks again. He works his way up to her breast, which he climbs. When he gets to the top he sticks his dick in the hole of her nipple where milk would normally come out. After coming he kisses the nipple and shrinks more. By the time he makes it to her face, he is the size of an flea. She takes a breath and he is sucked into her mouth.

Wakes up: The class is staring at him. After another ten minutes, the class ends. Mrs. Deitz winks at him as he walks out of the class.

Characters:
"Paul Morris - he is twenty and attending his local state collage. Blonde hair, blue eyes, and about 5'10"."
Mrs. Deitz - biology teacher at the college

Suggestions:
You have a very interesting theme going in your writing, with shrinking and erotica. You are very good at the visualization parts. I enjoyed the piece.

Character Count: 1,540 (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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