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 Baseball, My American Pie Open in new Window. [13+]
My thoughts about baseball and how it plays a role in my life. (in progress)
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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Review of Baseball, My American Pie

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A story about a boy's love with the game of baseball. After he talks about his experience with little league he goes on to tell how he learned about baseball and its stars.

He then goes on to express his opinions about baseball in general and about some of the problems that faced baseball when this article was written.

He is a fan of the Oakland Athletic Baseball team and he is not a fan of the American League changes regarding the designated hitter.

He also spends quite a bit of time addressing the problems of steroids and drugs in baseball today.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

His article is dated and deals with teams as they were in 2007. As we have moved different teams now are leading their respective leagues.

dblameck

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