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 What Happens in Heaven, Stays in Heaven Open in new Window. [13+]
A humorous description of Heaven for a dying sister.
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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Review of What Happens in Heaven

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I am sure we all have different ideas of what heaven will be like. The writer shares some of her ideas of what heaven will be like. She notes that the different religions of the world will all of course think of the concept of heaven to greatly different. The writer then goes on to describe the gates of heaven. The description of the gates seem to be important. After entering through the elaborate gates it seems that then envision of activities is more like one big party with everyone dressed in formal gowns and tuxedos.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

In the party atmosphere of this person's concept of heaven there are drinks and cigarettes and kisses of appreciation. It is more like a party.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Perhaps i take a more sedate view of heaven.

dblameck

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